A study of Ernest Friedrich August Rietschel's Bust of Felix Mendelssohn-Bartholdy. I'm slowly working my way through CG Talk's Anatomy Lesson Series which is basically where you try to do 50 studies from master drawings in a month of either the head or torso. It's taking me a lot longer than a month because I'm completely unfocused and I'm constantly drawing other things, but since I don't have a scanner, I can't really get those uploaded.
I am still without a tablet pen, so this entire thing was done in Photoshop with the mouse. I spent about two hours total on it. Critiques encouraged but I probably won't update it, my hand hurts too much. I see a few glaring errors but I'm satisfied with what I've accomplished tonight, overall.
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
I wish I could see the source so I could better aid you in the critique.
As it stands, you can always go back to it later since your hand is tired, and rightfully so. Silly mouse.
The whites seem a bit too harsh to me so maybe dim those a bit, as well as create a softer background. The harsh black doesn't do much to enhance your bust.
The shadows are good but I'd like to see them smoothed a bit more and work a bit on the ear to shape it and make it solid, unless the hair is covering it.
Thank you! The hair is indeed covering the ear and I used a black background because the background of the original was black and I felt like it would help me more accurately achieve the same values.
I guess later I should define the ear to make it more distinguishable from the hair. Thanks!
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
hehe, well, noses are particularly hard to shade, so yes, your offering has appeased the nose gods ;D They will bless you with an even more excellent nose in your future. haha
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Banana, banana, banana, banana, terracotta, banana, terracotta, terracotta pie!
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
As it stands, you can always go back to it later since your hand is tired, and rightfully so. Silly mouse.
The whites seem a bit too harsh to me so maybe dim those a bit, as well as create a softer background. The harsh black doesn't do much to enhance your bust.
The shadows are good but I'd like to see them smoothed a bit more and work a bit on the ear to shape it and make it solid, unless the hair is covering it.
Hope it helps.
I guess later I should define the ear to make it more distinguishable from the hair. Thanks!
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
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let's talk about____ spaceships.
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
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.::Just tell Nemo you couldn't find him because you were getting stoned... he'll understand::.
Comments make me smile ;D
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"Each day I go to my studio full of joy; in the evening when obliged to stop because of darkness I can scarcely wait for the morning to come... if I cannot give myself to my dear painting I am miserable." - William Bouguereau
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.::Just tell Nemo you couldn't find him because you were getting stoned... he'll understand::.
Comments make me smile ;D
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